Some people think,
that a man is made
when a boy experiences a change out to the ordinary.
I think,
I became a man
when I asked you to marry me.
Some people believe,
that a gentleman is made,
not born.
I believe,
that each and every person
is a gentleman.
Some people say,
that a lucky man is someone,
who has a lot of luck and or stuff.
I say,
that I became a lucky man
right now, when you marry me.
Some people feel,
I may be crazy
for my logic.
I feel,
sorry for those "Some people"
because they never got the chance to meet you,
the one that I love and live for.
Author notes
This poem was alot of fun to write. (even though I'm a female...lol)
I wish that someday, some guy would say something like this to me.
Written May 22nd, 2002
A contest entry
- DARKs bachelor party by theDARK1.
305 points, ended January 18, 2004, 5 entries
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i love your poem,sounds like fun to write!great job.
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i think you did a wonderful job displaying love for another. i also hope that you will be graciously swept off your feet when it comes to that big day. i must say i did not see the connection where i am getting to party to celebrate bachelorhood, but itz ok since the wedding has been called off. i do wish you happiness in the future for that very lucky someone. thank you for entering.
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I am very confused, I'm not easily confused, but, er, I am now. Is this a joke? Or just a novel way of getting folks to look at your Author page with it's advertising and stuff. I know this is a contest and I'm not one to speak in the negative of fellow contestants, so, where do I start. I can't, so I wont.
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oh this flows so well i really love they ideas it is based on
it has real emotion and dashes of pride
i loved readding it
and hope you got dome good food lol
secret smile
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