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The Girl with a Disease

A hippie who’s heart knows no bonds
She’s in [love]

The one who finds a hobo and wants to take him home
She’s in [love]

The girl that cries when she steps on a flower

The one with a freaky toe
It secretly talks to her and tells her
She’s in [love]

The girl with a disease is dying
And only the man in red can save her
If only she was Juliet,

At least she’s in [love]

If only she could chew watermelon bubble gum

And touch a hippo

And one day she’ll tell the world to get over themselves

And she plans to one day marry the love of her life
Not the man she love

The girl with a disease is dying

Author notes

i dont care what you think in terms of what i did or did not do correctly
thank you

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  • Arkaengel
    August 18, 2008
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    Not the man she love?

    loves you mean?

    you need to proofread


  • written-in-ink
    August 18, 2008

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    If only she could chew watermelon bubble gum



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