The dimness shrouds the essence,
of the thoughts that hold a view,
as the light grows slowly dimmer,
in the everlasting way of you.
Pragmatic plays of justice,
shall never come to light,
in such extraordinary instigation,
that just ruined the whole night.
Flying words of wisdom shout out,
ignorant and beside the all about.
Author notes
1. Going home into the darkness of false light.
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended August 19, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


