you are there,
somewhere between
the bright light of day
and stark reality of night
pulling heart strings,
ensuring memories
never forgotten
the scent of you lingers,
reflected on dusk
Author notes
Prompt: Twilight
30 Words
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie~ 30/30/24 by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful in it's simplicity. you did such a fantastic job with the prompt.. I really loved it and glad it got Gold.. well done!
Angel
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I love the simpilicty in this, from the top to the very bottom. It makes sense and its very beautiful. The second stanza really keeps it together for me.
~Kystal Angel
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i love this.
espeically the second stanza
amazing write
best of luck in the contest
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Love, C
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