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Warning/Be Careful

Soft scents pepper seas
filled with tiny strands of
hair, which fills poets with
inspiration and vision
to spread affection

Within limits of
accessible speeches or
announcements, while still
maintaing that sharp, soundless,
barrier; never to be cracked

Unless by those who
possess the means to break down
or shatter that soft,
beating, thumping, vehicle
of life, death, and connection

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  • Solidified
    August 18, 2008

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    The title threw me off, your poem is beautiful. I especially like the last stanza. "connection" perfect word for a love poem.


  • Mr.
    August 18, 2008
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    Very sweet and gentle.