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Crepuscular



A sensation to sip 
under lukewarm bower of dusk,
voices echo, sweat aglow,
for a walk
in rippling loving falls,
tastes slide.

Rocked by distant whispers,
reassuring rediscovered,
bare delightful.
















Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Twilight
30 words

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  • Justmenow
    September 19, 2008
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    the imagery flowing from this poem is undeniable, well done.


  • etoile
    August 18, 2008

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    woah this is amazing!
    your imagery is great
    and the take on the prompt is really good also
    best of luck in the contest