Anothers shaking form pressing into the space I reserved for myself
I can feel her sinking deeper into the thoughts that defended this space so well
An intruder that is spiking fear and confusion inside these walls
The fear of possible loss is growing with her presence
Then as it seems I am about to be taken over by this anxiety
A numbness softly sets into the swirl of confusion
All of the angst and fear slowly becomes sedated
Lost in a warmth that grows into spreading comfort
I feel myself rising as her presence grows
I feel this new sense of existence
Translating into wonderment
I feel whole once again.
A contest entry
- Forbidden Words of Love by Mr..
750 points, ended September 1, 2008, 10 entries
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Love does make a person feel whole doesn't it.
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Love doesn't make a person feel whole doesn't it.
I never said what is felt as whole was real, we spend most of our lives riding emotions that are baseless and without substance. But when your in love can you really tell the difference ?
TY for the comment
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Sorry I had a typo because I'm sleepy. I meant love does make a person feel whole, at least it has made me feel whole.
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Excellent.
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