His Lips are like the ocean
ever changing
never the same smile twice
His smiles are like the rays of the sun
loving and light
warming up a cold winters day
His eyes like a warm summers night
warm, gental sapphiners
lighting up the sky
His hands like those of an angel
soft and graceful
as if sent from heaven
His touch like that of a virgin
sensual, demanding
yet never asking to much
His kiss like that of a true lover
slow, passionate
leaving me begging for more
His heart is like Prince Charming's
pure and innocent
only knowing how to love
His love is like a miracle
saving me when my hope was gone
he is My Angel
A contest entry
- Touch me with your words. by Ho74pp1eP1e.
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Comments
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Lovly, soft, and sensual. Good luck, sounds like a wonderful dream come true this Angel or yours.
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I love this poem! "He" sounds like a miracle! It is easy to see how much in love you must be with this individual.
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Thank you for this entry and I wish you well in this challenge.
Renee
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Beautifully expressed feelings flowed through your words.
Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.
Margaret
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