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Debate my Love

CHORUS 

 

Why can’t you see, what you mean to me
My love for you is so deep and true
Yes I see, but dare not believe, that something
Can happen between me and you

Tell me the reason, I must understand,
Why won’t you give my love a go
I like my life just the way it is, this reason
I’m sure you already know

So what must a girl do, to win your heart
Please speak truly, speak no lie
To win my heart she must find the key
And answer me, she love me why
I love you because you’re you, and my love
Is the key to unlock a heart so shy
You answer well, but not well enough
Have another go, have another try
Give me a go and I’ll lovingly show
Not a love of old, but a love of new
Women are all the same
They say the words but never do

They is not me, you must look deep and see
I can give so much, both love and lust
You’re a special girl and that’s the truth
But love is what I cannot trust


CHORUS


Come romance with me, dance with me,
Dance the tango of love
Come wine with me, dine with me,
Taste the fruits of love

I’ll romance with you, dance with you
Only to the rhythm of lust
I’ll drink with you, eat with you,
Eat the topping save you the crust



Can I ever change this mind of your’s
Or am I to hope in vain
Friends we’ll be and lover’s maybe
I only want to live my life, not the pains

At times you’re keen at times you’re mean
So unpredictable as you are
That’s just who I am, that’s just me
Always around the corner, never far

Sometimes it seems, you’re out of reach
And other times you seem so close
Just close enough to keep you close
I’m not the type that brags and boast
I like your cheekiness, I like your style
The way you talk it up, like most guys
Like most guys, you’re kidding me right?
They got nothing on a guy so fly
Cool you are, thats for sure
But cooler than Ken, the King of Cool?
I don’t know, what do you think?
Better yet, let’s ask the fool...

 

CHORUS

 

Author notes

Go easy on me, I've never written lyrics before, this is my first

Blue - Anna
Red - Derek

These lyrics were inspired by 2 good friends of mine Derek and Anna. Ones the biggest player in town and the other is just the sweetest thing.
I was writing this last night when they were both at my place sharing a pizza while debating thier love, thats how the chorus came about, its true by the way, he ate the topping and gave her the crust.

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Comments

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  • Darkwell
    April 5

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    this is both sweet and tragic. the players are always the ones that get us worked up, why? is it about not being able to really have them or is it that theres a player in us too anyway for somebody that didnt write lyrics before you did an awesome job here. High marks. I hope you keep going at lyrics more you seem to be natural at it


  • Alyzeh
    November 11, 2008

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    HAHAHAHAHAHHAAH. Are you serious? This happened? It's amazing. This piece reminded me of a couple I know . Haha. Are the two a couple? cause if they are, they'd make a great one. Haha. Oh boy! This was lovely, so very entertaining. Ken the King of Cool. Hahahaha

    GREAT.


  • chilali
    November 5, 2008
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    ooh! Nicey nice!

  • Devilkid
    August 26, 2008

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    .....

    that was really good. u shud come join mi crew lol jks. we all full, nah but dat was mad as for real keep it up

    xoxoxoxoxo


  • Angelflower
    August 21, 2008

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    Well this was really new and different.. I really liked it! lol. The flow was flawless and beautiful.. and the imagery was really vivid and just.. cool.. Lol. Something of love and something of pleading in a way bravo! I really loved this..


    Angel


  • Mallig gold member
    August 21, 2008
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    Very entertaining, a creative and interesting approach. Thanks for the entry!

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