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Sliding Down a Column of Broken-Sentenced Symbolic Prose

 

 

Sliding Down A Column of Broken-Sentenced Symbolic Prose

Delivered in a Blasé Droning Monotone

and Dying a Quivering Death

 

 

 

    

I found it among misused colors of misconformity

pressed against my mad desires,

offering itself to me

in tom-tom ambiance…

 

it was born in a tainted nightclub

where graceful orbs are slain in silence

then poured from a listless chalice…

 

might as well drink the wind-

such a mad languid form,

moaning in its peculiar, singular language,

twirled in an elusive motion that I could not catch…

 

teased with brambled sensations

from spindled arms of earthy shoots

digging into a cosmic sculpture,

tearing at its fleshy strata…

 

bluing cheeks of the dancing, devilish derva

freeze at first snowfall,

a visage of questing simplicity

targeting smiles,

swinging gates left squeaking on a hinge…

 

the keys tumble

into the frosted fingers of a golem

caught seducing his jagged rocks,

the sun awaking to his large ovular eyes

hungrily devouring the helpless mass before it…

 

and with its bony-fingered depressions

indented permanently around its own cadavered neck,

a column of sentence-fragmented symbolic prose,

genuflecting to a droning monotone,

blasé wherever possible,

seething with bitterness

and oozing poison throughout,

ends,

as the protagonists die a quivering death,

twisting and writhing all the way down its tubular length.

  

 

 

 

 

originally intended to be like the recent artful works of GreenHrtPaleMoon

 

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    • Age of Rain
      August 27, 2008

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      I left a comment on this already... I thought. Oh well. *Leaves another* I thought that this was wonderful. Much more intellectual than I could be. *is jealous*

      'tearing at its fleshy strata…' perhaps my favorite line. (I wish I had thought of it).

      'cadavered neck,'

      AMAZING reference.

      To me, this felt like a blend of our two styles, and I am honored that you have written this.


      • wbiro gold member
        August 28, 2008
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        thanks- actually you have much more variety than what I covered in the title, as if those kinds of writers are miserably huddled under a sun umbrella and you are out exploring the beach...