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[ who is this person ]

who is this person
the perfect guy
that some how
no matter how hard I try
I cannot become

I have tried
and I have failed
and I have tried again

The life I love
Kills me
beauty
and inocence
are not my strong suite

but try as I might
true love might never finde me
that is a dream
that will always haunt

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  • Cat10
    August 17, 2008

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    great job again keep it up though one thing, spelling "true love might never finde me" take the "e" out of "find"
    still a huge fan of your work and always will be