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[ A dark web of confusion ]

A dark web of confusion
Surrounding me
Makes it so I just can’t see
The pain I feel
Clouds my eyes
My fear is spelt
In the tears I cry
I reach out my hand
You fail to see
Just how much your happiness
Is hurting me

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  • HeartBr8ker
    August 18, 2008
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    good job

    This is a great write but you didnt follow rules so it wont be afinalist.... Sorry


  • HopelessPoet1087
    August 18, 2008

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    wow very emotional poem. confusion can be a very strong emotion within all of us, and it usually leads us to a truth we couldnt see before