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Left with battle wounds

Laying in bed beside you
Feels so real and raw
Your skin against mine
My lips against yours

Slowly I drift off to sleep
Your sweet nothings whispered
Music playing softly in the background
Bliss at its finest

I wish this could last forever
Not only tonight
If this could be my reality
I would live forever

Perhaps it's only the risk factor
The knowledge that you aren't mine
But for one night
I just don't care

Such a sweet loving man
Gentle touch
Soothing words
How I long for this again

Author notes

This again, is referring to the guy I spent alot of time with when my boyfriend and I split.

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  • live-laugh-love
    February 25
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    o wow, intreasting... kinda not my style but i can feel the emotion good work