Laying engolfed in your arms
Gazing intently into your eyes
Smiling not knowing why
Turning into a girl again
All these memories come rushing back
From the way it used to be
The way it always is
When a love is blooming again
The butterflies when my lips touch yours
The smile forming
As you lay there holding me
I know once again I'm safe
Suddenly my feelings turn cold
His face enters my mind
Butterflies gone
Guilt now inset
All I want to do is cry
I don't want him
He's now my past
I crave my future
The ring now gone
Feeling rushing back
Your gorgeous face replaces his
Once more I am in heaven
I long for the next time
When we are alone once more
When your true side emerges
And I am giddy again
Author notes
This was written awhile ago..My boyfriend and myself were broken up and this is referring to my feelings when i was with another guy.
What do you think I could improve?
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amazing
WOW nicely written i love everything about this poem i dont really have any favorite parts. I think that the ending is a little awkward but it works. I know what it feels like to crush on someone so long and then u find someone else to fill in that hole but when u think about it there is still part of u that wants that certain person back.. I love the title it suits it very well. -
Powerful, emotional write. I like it a lot. Minor spelling error "emerges" instead of "immerges" in the second to last line.
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Thanks for the comment and the spelling correction lol
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