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In Your Eyes

I see the depths of your soul
the emotional ties that bind
my heart in your hands


I see the future I always wanted
the truth, thats never spoken
my life now in your hands

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  • Virgoan
    September 13, 2008
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    Nicely penned...the first part is really good.

    Thanks for sharing your gift.


    HENSLEY

  • falling4everxo
    August 17, 2008
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    Very nice!

    This is a beautiful piece. I like the your use of complex imagery. Keep up the good work!