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My Dream

Bending over backwards
Trying to find your embrace
Tears falling from eyes
Pain from a breaking heart

Doing eveyrthing I can
I'm trying to please you
Attempting to win back
Your love I once felt deeply

Everyday it seems
I take a step towards happiness
Then one wrong move
I'm back two towards misery

I need to know
How to reach you
But someone needs to explain
What I'm doing wrong

The day I find out
I will be in your arms
Crying tears of sadness turned happy
Gazing into your eyes

No longer am I that person
I've changed so much already
I still see a long road ahead of me
But your love is worth it all

What do you think I could improve?

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