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The Bride's Nightmare

A simple word,
One word that could set the world on fire
One word that can break a heart.
"No." He said
And their audience stood in silence.

Every womans worst nightmare
All her trust, all her soul
She had put into him.
But now, like a scene from a movie
She is broken to pieces, with the words ringing in her ears,
"No."

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  • Rclane
    August 17, 2008

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    Very well done and good take on prompt...check line ten should "words" be "word"? Thank you for entering. best of luck