In the heavenly wonder lies three souls,
tow male one female.
I had a pockect of magic beans
I plant them and added water,
by the great sun light it grow into a bean-stock
like jack i climb up the bean-stock not to a monster.
I climb to those golden gates I payed St. Petter off and he let me in,
There I found my three souls paying a game of poker I yelled their names
They waved and we climb back down the bean-stock and we when home to our
waiting mothers arms, with eyes full of tears they place kiss on their cheeks
and the three promise never to die again.
Author notes
for all who has lost love ones in death and wish to have them back aging
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I love this poem.. I have lost a few family memebers and one that really hit home my grandmother.. I wish at times that I could go to heaven and bring her back to her rightful place here back home..
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This was really great and different. I liked it. Just watch your tenses. I noticed for some of the lines, you use past tense, then sometimes you switch to present tense. Also watch your homophones. I noticed a couple places where you used 'there' when it should have been 'their'. Otherwise, great write!
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