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Together

left apart two souls drift
heartaches filter in their sift
rolling shadows tempting light
searching wings within a flight

falling minds bereft attraction
lonely songs seek satisfaction
vigilant forces driving greed
grasping futures within need

eyes unite a distant yearning
wake the sleeping giant burning
collaboration now ensues
growing colors scatter blues

shared energies ignite
remnant darkness bleaching white
warmth consumes the fragile ice
revealed contentment less a price

brought together, two souls soar
tendrils pulsing from their core
auras grow complexity
peace completed, floating free

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  • Kage-saumas-girl
    August 18, 2008
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    oh wow....i loved it. this was truely beautiful. <3


  • Mr.
    August 17, 2008
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    Nice poem. I love the imagery.