The approaching
time of magic,
when day
flows into night.
A cataclysmic,
crashing from
seeing to out of sight.
You hear
the darkness crawling in,
witching hour
soon will begin.
Author notes
Twilight_by_radix deviantart 30 words exactly
A contest entry
- Quickie~ 30/30/24 by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was a lovely piece, I liked how the ending seemed to really round off the poem. Your rhyme worked really well which made the poem really nice to read. I thought the idea of hearing the darkness crawling, that seemed kind of abstract and really conveyed the scene. Nice work x
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oooh this is good!
i like the ending
and the rhyme
goodluck in the contest
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I love it! A beautiful expression of a "taken-for-granted" time of the day. Well done.
Slayer
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