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Fantasy

  If I could only speak of the passion I Enfold for him
              He fills every breath I take
              The shivers deep inside when he
                  quenches seducing sin
          As he glides his touch of seduction,
              Our sin plumaged into the dream
    For the moment, forgotten all that's done wrong
  As he passionately shatters all the anger, all the hate
          The betrayal is over and done
There is no anguish, No disbelief, the creation encircled
                                                                        Pure inducement
 
          He’s all The illusory a girl desires
          Then he goes, Closing the barred
Walk down the path of shunt, Leaving the path, he’s gone
                    No more

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  • Evasive Angel
    August 18, 2008

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    This work was a pleasure to read, it inspired feelings that have been familiar to most of us at some point.

    thank you


  • Mr.
    August 17, 2008
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    I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck.