Sunlight's traces
evaporating in aged eyes,
middle aged dusk,
feeling creepy approach
of winter's night.
Immortality's epilogue
penned as song
notes dipped
in favorite anesthetic
for sound of reaper footsteps.
Author notes
30 words
Prompt: Twilight
A contest entry
- Quickie~ 30/30/24 by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Death is what I saw from this, so beautiful.
~Kystal Angel
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wow this is really good!!
i liked it a lot
goodluck in the contest
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You did such a wonderful job with the prompt. All the best of luck in the contest.
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What a wonderful take on the prompt! This is amazing my brother! I really enjoyed it! It has a soothing feel to it, and I think I really needed that tonight!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Good Luck!!!!!!!!
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