Light is waning
sun has set,
years have rushed upon me
facing the darkness alone.
Bright days of youth I scorned
trying to accumulate riches
Twilight is a mere…hush away.
Author notes
Prompt Twilight
A contest entry
- Quickie~ 30/30/24 by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice job on emotion, word choice and description of twilight! This is great.
~Kystal Angel
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this is well written
i liked the last line a lot
goodluck in the contest
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Aww.. a heartfelt write here...loved it dear
All the best in the contest!
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