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Acrostic~Name Poetry for Lost Vampyre Angel

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Hi wifey

      

       Loveliness was borne from deep within
       often seen as beautiful balloons
       souls, who've found their way and all too soons
       together in their avidness to win.

       Verily as luck would have it solve
       a girl, who has been searching the abyss
       making sure that what we are evolve.
       pretending we're not dead to render this.
       You give a warmth of gratitude, like peace
       rotating like the earth around the sun
       eternal love that grasps it from release.

       And where they go, I gather not surprise
       not knowing is a place what hiding does
       god given, in a place that never dies!
       eternally, it's ours and no disguise.  
       Leave the dark behind and follow thee!

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  • Arizona Sunset
    August 22, 2008
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    you always write beautiful acrostics Full of warmth from your heart. blessings always ~Trisha~


  • Wind 03
    August 18, 2008

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    woooow

    beautiful! your style is amazing.
    You give a warmth of gratitude, like peace
    rotating like the earth around the sun
    eternal love that grasps it from release
    beautiful!!!

    juliet


  • Bane Wraith
    August 17, 2008

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    That was quite a feat, Beautiful piece of prose you wrote with the simple guideline of a name... I'll have to try it ^_^

    Well done, and be wlel, m'lady.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    August 17, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is an incredible poem you have written for my dear sweet lovable Sweetems as I nicknamed her. she is a much deserving bathing beauty of this write you have penned here. I admire your style here with the acrostic. I must say kudos as well on the proper English and the incredible punctuation too. any ways a mighty beautiful blessed write for someone who deserves it. keep penning away. Signed, A friend of hers, Paul


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 17, 2008

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    awws thank you so much tony!!
    its so beautiful dark yet sensual, you did so well with my name! you did my name justice! Thank you so much
    this is just beautiful and i feel so special you wrote this for me! all my love, always here for you
    kitty xxx

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