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New Day

Small children play
Beaneath our hung heads.
Future firefighters and ballet dancers

Leaves crunch beneath our feet
once flowing with life

The wind frames our faces
So why are our minds in the mud?

Music dances all around us
Should we smile and take its hand

The cadence that breaks open our eyes to the world
We cannot shut it out

The beauty that covers death

We can let it in our doors
Which swing wide shut every night,
locked to the darkness of the earth

A new morning

A new breath in the lungs of every being

Shaping our lives, hope is restored
In the reflection of every tear
In the depth of every hug
In the warmth of every kiss
In the taste of every smile

Watching the world pass by like a merry go round

Why do we reach out to stop the children from jumping on?

The ride is the adventure.

We cannot hesitate for success.

We cannot pass by each opportunity.

We cannot deny each of us, as children,
The desire for a new day,
A new adventure.

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  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    Lovely innocent thoughts in this piece. I really like the piece. It says a great deal and yet it is so simplitic. Thank you for sharing this it was really good.


  • whiterabbit.
    August 28, 2008

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    I really like this. It's cute and I like the innocence in it. I like the descriptions that you've included. Great write and thanks for entering.