Feelings entwine
In the sun's shine
Under the pine--
Proposal accepted.
Dressed in white
Garbed with delight
Try not to sound trite
Saying "I do."
Grasping hands
On white beach sands
Each understands
On the honeymoon.
Watching the kids
Through half-closed lids
Haven't forbid
The touch of lips.
Growing old
Feelings still bold
Heart never cold
Side by side
The lovers die.
Author notes
I am pretty sure I didn't use any of the forbidden words...
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Comments
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Lovely
a whole life in like 21 lines WOW
we titled our stuff the same
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Very nice.
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a lovely reach for the places erogeny melts toward. Two souls replenishing where they left off. Lovely work.
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