the anxiety builds up in my veins,
making everything around me strange.
i look to my left and then to my right,
somethings out there in the darkness of night.
my cell phone begins to ring loud and clear,
along with whispers vibrating in my ear.
"crystal, your relatives are vampires;
you need to get out of that house."
my moms words scream in my ears,
and plunge knives into my throat.
i can't get myself to breathe,
im gasping for any bit of solid air.
i turn to run out the door but my knees give in,
i fall screaming to the hard floor.
crawling to the cold bear wall,
i get off my knees and stand to my feet.
silently begging for my mom to hurry,
yet she's nowhere to be seen.
satans nailing words into my head,
chasing after me as i try to escape.
the doors all seemed to be tightly locked,
and the windows sealed to the wall.
screaming out prayers for god to help,
begging him to safely get me out.
with satans evil words filling my ears,
and sweat dripping off my face,
my mom pulls into the driveway,
to fastly free me from this place.
i hurriedly jump into the car,
heart pounding out of my chest,
and rapidly gasping for my breath.
i look at my vibrating phone,
and pick it up off my lap.
the devil's sending me texts,
telling me he's going to be back.
Author notes
it's rather hard to put this into poem form but i did my best. <3
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you did a pretty good job,
telling a bad dream in rhyme form ain't easy, great job. be safe, Bell
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thanks. <3
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WOW!
Straight out of a demonic slasher flick.
I can only imagine what the previous day must have been like to put all thissuggestion in your head before sleep.
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i think it's because we were talking about satan and how he tries to steal people from god and stuff at church. but im not sure.
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No spicey burritos that night to go along with that?
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im pretty sure not.
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Eeek this is scarey...yet sorta funny because it's a dream. I don't think it sucks.
the "crystal your relatives are vampires you neeed to get out of that house" made me laugh. lol I'm sorry.
I love you and good luck
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haha, yeah. it is pretty funny now. but when i was dreaming it, it wasnt funny at all. i was rather scared when i woke up. lol. dont be sorry silly.
i love you too and thanks.
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