new moon
the empty pages
in my journal
A contest entry
- Haiku and Bless You! by azure85.
4500 points, ended August 22, 2008, 57 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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so very nice .... many levels, open ended >>> Gina
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Sharp
I do not do haiku, but:
New Moon --I associate with new beginning; with good luck (provided not first seen thtough glass); with the Muslim emblem, seen on flags and so on.
The empty pages are to me like a Janus thing: either, new pages, which the new period is offering to be written on, metaphorically; or the blank pages which should have been full of events and activities recorded, but weren't, because there were none. Yet the two are not mutually exclusive: if things have not been going as they should, there is optimistically always a time to change, or for good events to happen by chance.
And if the writer thought any of this, I'll give them a quid!
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Great imagery. congratulation on silver
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Oh, this is very nice - gives the reader plenty to interpret. Makes me think of fresh starts, tomorrow the first day of the rest of my life etc.
Well done B-I
I enjoy your haiku style.
Alan
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new moon
the empty pages
in my journal
A wonderful haiku, the beginning of so many thing, a school year, an eassy, a poem. So much potential, a good haiku to think about, thank you so much.
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