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It's far too late.

I’ve walked these roads far too long,
And I feel that I’m alone.
I fear that you are watching me,
You care but you don’t understand.
I think one day that you’ll leave me here,
Cold and all alone,
We know that our memories will linger, but for me, that’s not enough.
Through my tears of blood,
I see your face,
I hear your voice, but you are only here in my mind.
For I see none of you.
The rain falls down my face; I call your name out loud.
Truth’s harsh reality hits me as I fall to the ground.
I lie there, dazed and confused.
No! don’t offer me a hand.
In the dirt… it’s where I belong.
Don’t try to save me, don’t spit on me if I’m on fire.
Let me lie here.
Let me die here.
I swear I’ll be ok.
Looking up to the heavens, I watch the dark clouds
Pass by.
I smile sadly as a Wray of light shines on me.
“No, lord.” I cry.
“No. it’s far too late!”

yah, im depressed again. but comment anyway...

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  • IncompleteLullaby
    January 9, 2009

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    Wow. this is so amazing.
    great write your words are beautiful xx
    the ending is so deep.
    Get better soon hun xx


  • storiesuntold
    August 18, 2008

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    Interesting write here

    You have penned this very well and I like the ending as well for truthfully its never to late until you give up on yourself unknowing of what he had in line for you in the future


  • Yorkshire Lass
    August 18, 2008
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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    August 17, 2008

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    Oh this is so sad! I am sorry you are depressed. I felt every word that you have wrote in this. So many times. Feeling that no one is there, that I am all alone. Wishing that someone would listen, hear my words even if not spoken. Just to see me & see my pain. Thank you for sharing. I hope you feel better soon! If you need to talk IM me! In love & Light... may the Goddess hold you close & wipe away your tears... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~