She asked about the “glass stairs”…
And a class stares
She brings out so many fears
The lives we live are full of tears
In which direction are the steps to take?
Maybe if we step forward they break
Or do the steps go up?
Maybe we empty our cup
Then comes lightening, rumbling, wind and the storm…
Then the eye sees us in that moment—we’re warm
In its passing a way…
Sometimes It takes courage to face each day
When climbing the steps is the only way
Trying not to look down on others (as they say)
Lessons in life can make us or break us
Some dare not move, from the back of life’s bus…
Author notes
This is dedicated to ears2hearyou... She wrote a wonderful piece back in May/July 2008 that really moved me called "The glass staircase"; here's the link: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4192575 So, in a sense it's a response to it. Thank you for this visit.
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Hey this was great, and thanks for the link to the other poem... You have put forth a bit of wisdom here, from several angles. The allusion at the very end adds some punch to the point as well. Climbing such a staircase requires some attention given, a mind made up, too, and a certain kind of determination. So nicely written.
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My, my...she sure can pour on the compliments can't she? hahaha. Thanks a million ten (well, thanks 10 million -
). I apologize that it took so long for me to reply to this comment BUT that doesn't diminish the impact of it on me. I really appreciate what you saw in this piece and how kind your are to lay it out so nicely. Glad that you enjoyed it as you have.
AsIThink...
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This is very thoughtful, and somehow inspiring. Together the poems read well, and I also would like to see a third poem, maybe after a little more time has passed. Good stuff.
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Thank you very much pania for this read. I am so honored by this wonderful visit and such touching feedback. I will check-in with ears2hearyou and see what she thinks (unless you'd like to honor us?) - This was an 'unofficial' add to her 'train-of-thought' done as a dedication. Nothing I can take credit for...I was just following her thinking here.
AsIThink...
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well done my friend,
glass stairs
believe the glass stairs lead you where you need to go without fear, they will never shatter.
how sad to stay put.
again your brilliance leaves me in awe,
courage will keep you safe and warm through any storm,exceptional as always my friend.
again your heart is showing
God bless...
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With this kind of inspiring feedback, how could I ever 'fade to black'? I want to thank you again for your incredible compliments; they help me to stay grounded and grateful at the same time. I'm happy about the way this has affected you... Like always, it's a pleasure to see you here. You have a 'knowing' heart...it's glowing with warmth too.
AsIThink...
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You have enhanced ears2hearyou's words...The both of you have woven a powerful piece of writing. Life has so many different steps to achieve our goals..standing still does not make them happen..So we do tread on a glass staircase.
Great job.
Soulful Woman
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Thank you very much Soulful Woman...she didn't know about this so it was sort of a 'surprise' (lol). Naturally, when I read her words of satisfaction and that she was pleased with it, I felt better. Didn't really know what she would make of it. You have really honored us both with this great comment and compliments. Love your insightful observation too.
AsIThink...
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This really touched my heart!
It has been a year now...since my first arrival with great tears of grief and hopelessness on ap.com.
So many roads of healing and recovery, not able to blame
circumstance or deed, but how I RESPOND POWERFULLY..
even if it means to fall down upon my knee's and beg for
God's mercy.
I've read so much beauty, and passion, it inspired me to
reach sometimes shakily through and ask my soul to
write of strength and power I knew lived somewhere deep
deep in my soul.
I read the courage of so many poets, and was amazed
at their might. If only...if only...i could be that
honest with myself...and not fear what my soul writes.
For me...each line and verse...peeled away layers
of grief and despair, and I finally could see some
lessons I was meant to learn....even if it is upon
shaky knees.
Thankyou, dear poet for feasting my heart with your
poetry!
ears/Seattle
see on the road......many adventures are still untold!
Thankyou!!
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Wow...I am so glad that you liked this. After reading what you wrote, I felt so compelled...didn't know how you'd receive it but had to take the step. I was just that moved by your write. So, imagine my joy at how you responded to this. I feel fortunate indeed; so many express gratitude - but your expression of it is enhanced by the extending of even more (plus encouragement). That is so powerful. Thank you very much for reading this and accepting it as a small contribution to your wonderfully inspiring call.
AsIThink...
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Exceptional
A great dedication/answer back piece! full of vivid imagery, great rhythm, you know, the usual! l.o.l.
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lol... I have come to expect you on my pages Swan-son (hahaha); today is not exception. Thanks for all the great things you always say about my stuff - feels good to hear I have to admit.
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Okay this totally makes perfect sense after going and reading her poem.
Great response, you actually posed more thoughts for the reader to consider, and together the two poems make really great inspiration. Possibly there could be a third addition which does describe life after taking the steps.. very cool response.
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Wow...thank you so much. I didn't realize anyone was viewing this. I realized it when I went back to "ears'" piece to check something, saw your comment and said, "HUH???" - lol.... This is very touching. And a pleasant surprise. Pardon me for wondering but are you volunteering for "a third addition"? The one "which does describe life after taking the steps..."? Why thank so much... Please send me the link when it's completed...I can't wait.
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hahaha no I am not.
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hmmmm...but you are going to be thinking about it. Good enough for me. hahaha.
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