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fire in my eyess.

i can't describe how angry i feel..
how much i want to hear you squeal
how much you interfear with my life
yet you dont notice when i try end it with a knife..
while i sit and cry you stand and whine about the way i dress
your making so STRESSED, i could NOT bloody CARE LESS!
am always looking out the window waiting to be rescued
but am living a fairy tail am screwed.
hate MY life
i wish i could end it with one strike.




yuh i know this poem sucks..but you can't see how ANGRY i am..
feel like screaming till someone can feel how i feel.
well anyway :/ if you dont like it am sorry..just needed to write somethink down
before .... happens.

what should i improve in my future poems?

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