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Sky's Children

delicious shivers,
brilliant breaths,
regrets bleed tonight,
as the cries echo
back to the hungry ears,
are we in our heavens?

I am the moon's daughter,
and you are a child of the sun,
created for such radiance,
yet I am of a gentler light

you are gold
and I am pale silver

such beings
designed so oppositely
can never
inhabit like planes
or times
of existence

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  • Melodies gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    A gorgeous poem, truly!

    How perceptive of you to write such a beauty of a poem about how some beings just don't mix. Wonderfully done, dear one.