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my daughter

for years i have been trying
your mother and i
to have you
but she didnt know why

i took her hand
put it to my heart
i wanted to create you
i wanted to make your heart beat

6 months in
your mother tried to take you life
i wouldnt let her
because you were half  mine

my beautiful daughter
9 months ago you were born
my beautiful baby girl
my baby
i promise i'll never let you fall
i'll never let you go
i love you
ember.

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  • This is a special piece fiull of nice emotion..
    well done and congrats on being a daddy


  • Mrs. C.
    August 17, 2008
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    ty and grats


  • JustFallingApart
    August 17, 2008
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    aww, congrads on being a dady


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    August 17, 2008
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    busted


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 17, 2008
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    who the hell is ember?!?!

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