Have you heard of the new desert bus?
Room for our luggage and all of us.
Runs from camp to the desert oasis,
leaving tire tracks, no other traces.
Air conditioning is built right in,
watch the bugs, I suggest you dont grin.
Seating's tight and a little close,
so do have some plugs for your nose.
Because these passengers smell really bad,
can't have you ride, all that way stinking mad.
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Love you Tory
Picture Prompt found here: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2418069
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"Runs from camp to the desert oasis,
leaving tire tracks, no other traces."
liked those lines best, fun read
thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest....
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Oh yeah the air would be so thick you could carve it.
Easy rhyme sending my thoughts into vivid imaginings.
Great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest. Maybe I should take your advice and not grin but 
could be safer dont want to go to the dentist for a debugging.
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Very good, is it safe to grin now?
Good luck in the contest.
Don
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Nice write!! Live how you rhymes oasis with traces, tough words to rhyme. Best of luck in the contest.
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"Stinking Mad"---Great Line!
Well done & Best of Luck in the Contest!
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