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Who Are You? (Etheree(

Who
are you
in my house
You're not a mouse
It's more than a hunch
there's no way you're my lunch
Could it be that you're a chick
with your trill, tweet and twitter sick
Just able to speak with hacking quack
Buck up, for in time you'll be back in whack



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Pigture Prompt.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 1, 2008

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    nicely done form and good rhyme, flow and a fun read

    thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest....


  • dustookie2
    August 30, 2008
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    Am not sure about the title....do you mean Why Did I or What Did I ? yeah think our keyboards would know better...but it happens we all have used my cheap keyboard just gets around Presentation is a big draw card to entice readers to our work.... A nice take on the prompt challenge. Good luck and thank you for the pleasure.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 18, 2008
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    Very Very Clever and creative!
    Well done & Best of Luck in the Contest!


  • Griswold gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    Heh, nicely done for this picture prompt. A Rhyming Ethree, hard enough to perform, and funny too. best of luck to you...Scott