Idiocy like gasoline fueled
to burn stronger than the stars;
hatred in deepest cores
so profound, I can taste it
linger in my pores.
Questions film the air like
thick fog stains the eyes with
cataract formation-
insufferable suffocation under
intense stupidity; black soot
clouds my vision while flames
ring in my ears.
Intolerance holds true to form
when in the wake of witlessness
Author notes
I cannot stand stupid people. D:
In a list
A contest entry
- Choking by harrypotter.
375 points, ended August 22, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love him ♥
Comments
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All I can say is DAMN!!!! This is INCREDIBLE, and I FEEL like SHIT ON A STICK because I cannot include you in my contest because you said NOTHING of the "CHOKING" issue I asked you to present....DAMN...HOLY HELL you have some SERIOUS talent, my friend...I am sorry about the contest, but you are making me reconsider just making a contest that has just prewrites only...I think this is BRILLIANT!!!!!
hp
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The more I read of your poetry, the more I am amazed.
Good luck in the contest, you better win.
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wow, this is really deep! i really enjoyed this and your vocabulary (like insufferable suffocation) and imagery
(like black soot clouds my vision while flames ring in my ears.) this is excellent. great work, Carly!
-pb fudge loves you!
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