Why
did I
have to try
something so new
An enormous miscue
Right in my face it blew
Now in need of new venue
It was a hair raising event
Here and there everything went
Truly was a day, not very well spent
Author notes
Picture prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- 10,000 POINTS ~ LANDSLIDE HUMOR - WHO IS THE FUNNIEST POET ON AP? ROUNDS CONTEST ~ 1st mud wave of entire mountain of contest on the brighter side of life! ~#108~ PLEASE LOOK INSIDE by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended September 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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well, you have a misspell on line four and think you might of used some punctuation, good write form wise
thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest....,
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Haha, nice job with the prompt and with the form poetry. Best of luck in the contest with this humorous piece.
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Well written & versed!
best of luck in the contest!



