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Wht Did I (Etheree)

Why
did I
have to try
something so new
An enormous miscue
Right in my face it blew
Now in need of new venue
It was a hair raising event
Here and there everything went
Truly was a day, not very well spent

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 1, 2008

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    well, you have a misspell on line four and think you might of used some punctuation, good write form wise
    thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest....,

  • Topnotchsy
    August 18, 2008

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    Haha, nice job with the prompt and with the form poetry. Best of luck in the contest with this humorous piece.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 17, 2008
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    Well written & versed!
    best of luck in the contest!