the glass is waiting
the bottle winked
the smoke arising from sparks
the tobacco not complaining
could we combine them both
and have the most expectant hope
for what good is the salt?
and wherefore will the mocks stand
let me shine with ferocity
uncle kind, and aunt darling
caught in the middle of the swig
and plastered amidst the swagger
pilasters of promises adding spokes to the imagination of my wheel.
Please tell me what you think
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man i have no clue what to say... lol... but quite liked this... UNDERSTANDING your work though... i think that'll take me time...
where are you man these days? how are you doing? hows singing going on?
btw... how much ever i understood... great write...
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Hey I really liked the feel here.. I guess it would be interesting- this in hindi- too?! But the later part I can only try to understand.. The later half of the poem- would you pls help me.. explain?? Mesa duffus rite now
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the latter half i think would be a trippers haven, although i get to that state without any help hahahaha!!
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rahul, what song!!?? I have been witing for it.. have not got it in mail? I'll msg you the email address.. I passed your msg to hitesh.. and waiting for your song!
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And I know how that feeling is.. Try BreadTalk's Lite cheesecake and a strawberry orange blossom after doing a pure raaga.. Same effect lol...
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It sounded beteer than those Rock On songs! Really cool.. Keep challenging yourself.. your voice seems like thin glasses with little water gently clinking.. Hitesh's voice is like a soft cloth rippling and forming waves.. Mine I am told is like Im singing from some far away place.. lol.. Listening to your song was quite inspiring Rahul Wish you the very best.. Dont forget us when you get all famousy ... 'Livin the life'.... Nice.
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