Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

the original count



the walk by the serpent who spat his hood at my passing

in the woods i am born yet again

accumulate all that was always mine

no more haunted by the sense of time

blessed unicorn unknowingly spawned in me all that is pure

the river flowed ; full throttle

truncating mires of labyrinth

the stems curled into the grizzly web

a charred meteor kissed the hopeful grass dried

and the lamp cried all night long

the clouds answered while the sun was smiling mid sky

the colors shined in the mighty arc

nothing left in me by now only the now!


Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • fathom me
    September 9, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Hey thats a very sweet one.. It is interesting how nature, spirituality and sweetness combine and merge together difficult to demarcate which is which... Enjoyed it!!