Where ever you live,
Where ever you go,
Whenever you weep,
Whenever you laugh,
I will be with you,
Right in your heart,
If you don’t believe me,
Go and have some sleep,
I will kiss you in your dreams,
On your lips so deep,
And when you will wake up,
You will have my taste,
In your honey mouth,
Trust in me,
My love is all I've got,
Where ever you live,
Where ever you go,
I am along with you,
Right in to your heart,
Forget me not my darling,
O sweet! Forget me not.
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully Touching and Romantic!!
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"You will have my taste in your honey mouth" Interesting thought there. I like the decisiveness in your poem, the reassurance in the tone. Nicely done. Later, AG
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excellent
Go and have some sleep,
I will kiss you in your dreams,
On your lips so deep,
And when you will wake up,
You will have my taste,
In your honey mouth,
Trust in me,
My love is all I've got,
you did portary a deep love and attachment.That too very well. It made a fine reading.I love dthe above lines...that could be easily used in love letters.Please visit my poetry and offer comments. -
oh, what a cute and sweet poem! I loved it! You really showed your love for whoever it was directed to. "i'll be with you, right in your heart"...
"i will kiss you in your dreams, on your lips so deep"...
what an affectionate poem! I really enjoyed it! Great job!
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very wonderful write i love the forget me not idea... flows very well. Truly beautiful write! keep on penning!
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