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Sketches

Missing image

Pacified
by crafting pictures
with clouds,
I press my lips
to your cheek bone;

peach moon glow.
Soft as skin; breathing in time.

I close my eyes
and start to mould
naive insecurities into

new shapes.
Each with opaque lines,
and soft curves;

 

sketches of our future.

Author notes

image by Dagmar Zupan taken from art.co.uk

Silverscent. Amaranthine Lover.
I've read the rules best I can. This is only 14 lines despite the site saying there are 17.

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    This is a beautiful piece and I love what you have done with the picture!


  • aanika
    August 19, 2008

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    peach moon glow.
    Soft as skin; breathing in time.

    *jaw drops*
    your imagery is breathtaking.
    amazing.


  • etoile
    August 18, 2008

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    i really like the imagery in this.
    & the words you used are beautiful.
    it also flows very nicely and i like how you broke it up into stanzas

    nice write!