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ugh.

Different nights
different ceilings
every time
this same damn feeling

insomnia
depression
frustration
anxiety

exhaustion gets

the
best
of
me



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I really think it's this horrible hybrid of not having anything to keep me occupied paired with a state of mental exhaustion that kicks my normal optimistic attitude to the curb

horrible poem

but at least it gave me something to do.

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  • Bittie
    August 18, 2008
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    you're my hero. says so on myspace.

    love you. hope you feel better.


  • into your eyes
    August 18, 2008
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    i like it when you're not optimistic.


  • untitled.
    August 17, 2008
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    I know this feeling (feelings rather), all too well. It sucks the life out of you without warning, sometimes. Excellent piece. Short, yet got the point across in a dry and realistic way. Sometimes that's all there is. Hoping you get some sleep, and you optimistic attitude kicks back in, . Very good write, in my opinion.

    An insomniac brethren,

    ~S.