Closer to you is just never enough, greed eats away at my head,
I need to feel you sink into my skin, steaming and hot on our bed,
wanting you more like an addict on speed, muscles are tightened and hard,
you hold the pack as I shuffle and toss, ready to turn the first card,
no space between as our bodies unite, all inhibitions are shed,
closer to you is just never enough, greed eats away at my head.
A contest entry
- Sensual Delights (ADULTS ONLY) by Dusty Rose.
950 points, ended September 3, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful. It went perfectly with pic too. I love the tender sensuality in this piece. It's gorgeous. If there was anything that could improve it, I would only suggest a couple of periods, to make it flow better. other than that it's perfect. thank you so much for entering.
Dusty
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