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To be a Little Angel

Little angel on earth
Where do you reside?
It's not everyday you come to see me.
Sometimes I wish I would be you for a day
And no, not to fly
That's over rated nowadays.
I'd wish to be you, little angel
To get away from this complexity
That is the human entity
To know of nothing more than
"Eat to live, sleep to live, reproduce to live"
Would be of utmost pleasantry,
I have to say, little angel
You have it so well.

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  • faithwhisperer silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    Very nicely done! I like this idea, of the butterfly being an angel...nice thought! Thanks for your entry!