Nothing between
Me
And my freedom
But steel bars
Nothing between
But everything
In my way
The one I love
My ocean
My air
Now a hurricane
Crime
Written in his perfect eyes
How could I ever
Let that face
That beautiful face
Reside here
In sadness's realm
Salt tears
Bitter lies
Unforgiving past
I never wronged
I only loved
And now
Stuck here for eternity
For my lover
Author notes
I hope that made sense...
Basically the person's lover committed a crime and then she said that she did it so now she's in prision for something she didn't do.
Option 7. Write about being locked in jail even though your not guilty
A contest entry
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950 points, ended September 10, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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I could never
to admit to a crime is not something you take in place of another . For no love in the world could ever help him if he is such a small person as to let his spouse be jailed for them . I say let them do the time for the crime never take that priveledge that comes with being a criminal away from them .
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Ahh.. sounds like being betrayed by someone trusted and paying for their crime! Nicely done!!
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