Doesn't take much,
you know that as
teasing transitions into
vamp-like advances
you guide me with
an impish smile upstairs
where we are
not hard to find
as clothes lead a trail
straight to our bed.
A contest entry
- Sensual Delights (ADULTS ONLY) by Dusty Rose.
950 points, ended September 3, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Soft and tantalizing!! Makes you want to know what came next...
Gorgeous sensuality as always!!
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wow
so well worded
so incredibly sexy
how do you always manage to make me so jealous
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I came back to read your words again and to comment Now I don't know what to say. I just enjoy the imagery you create in few words, leaving a knowledge in what is to come without saying it.
Love
Juls
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Description of impish smile and "vamp-like advances" are coy. I love the biting insinuation. That's what puts this poem into my happy place.
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I love how you left something to the imagination. This was very subtle, in a good way. And made me want more which is a good thing. Nicely done. And thank you so much fr entering.
Dusty
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This one just made me smile and reminded me of a poem that i've written that was very much along the same vein.... something like "follow me, i'm right behind you" Great job here, Michael.
~ Nicolette
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dad!!! it's just not right to think about stuff like that!!! Lol. not a good vision here!!! I think I'm blind!!! 
lol. You did a great job here though I really liked it..sensual and yet soft.. bravo!! best of luck with the contest.
Angel
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hahaha, bad dad! this is a great short sensual write though
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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More of your softly sensual words to entice thoughts of evenings spent together with someone who can take you to the heights of pleasure. Now I'll have to go and chase up that man of mine.
A brilliantly written take on the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest.
Love Margaret
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MMMMM!!!! Now I wonder what you are up to .Great write for the prompt provided, don't trip up over your socks , Ros
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