See? there it goes again,
I haven't felt it til you walked in..
My tempt's way up,
While something else is risin'..
It's that anticipatation,
Of what's to cum I'm realizin'..
Thoughts of Bodies work n' sweat til sun's risin'
Lookin' how you do, well it's not surprisin'
Takin' your time sheddin' those clothes, I'm idolizin' you
Body, so supple and firm.. oh so tantalizin'
I was lyin' alone on the bed,
Thoughts of you invade my head.. got me to fantazin'
How is it you can knock me out cold?
When you love me down, take it now..I give in to defeat
I'm all aflame, n' driven insane, once you apply.. the HEAT
A contest entry
- Sensual Delights (ADULTS ONLY) by Dusty Rose.
950 points, ended September 3, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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were do you find the words. however you find them you keeeep it up. i could read these all day. wow.
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YOU KNOW THIS WAS HOT
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Nicely done.
a cool expose of the inner sanctum
of a man's mind. I thought both the tone
and mood created was easy and pleasantly
passionate. The ladies cast spells that only
a brother could understand.
Thank God for the ladies. You rock my man
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A lovely seductive sensual write
All the best
~sugar~
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thanks!
How very kind of you to say! I am glad you liked this piece, I appreciate your time and your comment.
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I like this write!!
Takin' your time sheddin' those clothes, I'm idolizin'
You body, supple and firm.. oh so tantalizin'
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well done indeed!
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:)
thank you! I appreciate your comment.
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Hot and steamy!
Bursting with anticipation...you really know how to turn on that heat my friend. I nice hot sweaty romp through the mind of a Swan...alby
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well done here.
See you getting lovin
all the way around
no need in passion
to make a sound
I shall vanish where i came from
pssing a thumbs up
on a job well done.
Passions
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Good job! I like the rhyme. And it had a very seductive beat to it. It sizzles just enough. Thank you so much for the entry. And good luck.
Dusty
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wow this is smooooooth..
sexy and a bit naughty. I like.
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oh, the heat is risin'
that's no lie here
This is amazing and I loved
it ... best of luck in the contest.
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tantalzing and hot!
I loved your last paragraph...and it is so true,
although we women are of smaller frame, and new bones
we will not grow to match a man in strength....
there is a strength of soul and passion...that will make
a man climb the highest mountain just to be one ...and
bask in the passions of defeat!
ears/Seattle
well done brother, well done!
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Damn baby...give a girl a break.. This is the first piece I read today and it blew my mind..lol
This was awesome... It knocked me out cold..lol
Good luck in the contest...
Love ya
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very male exotic poem here artist i happen to think you did a very great job with soaking the thoughts best wishes in the contest.
red cat
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wow, did you mean cum? IF you did, I get it. I like "when you love me down" very strong. The whole poem seems to pulseate.You get your point across. Good.
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