The way he smiles still looks the same,
yet he never looks at me again.
One simple question ended it all,
that one sentence caused my fall.
He never smiled at me once,
he never even looked my way.
His eyes avoided mine,
and he kept his distance from me all day.
Boy, what did i do to make you hate me?
boy, what can i do to make you mine?
I wish one day you'd smile at me again,
then all this agony i can leave behind.
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- Unrequited emotions. by Lights Sorrow.
600 points, ended August 26, 2008, 11 entries
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That's beautiful, it flows very well and easy on the mind and heart. Very emotionally expressed! Well done.
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Beautiful, I loved this.
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heart wretching but very good
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