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A waste

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This was once a place
where our childish laughter
filled the clear creek.

We could play in the

bush growth around-

 days filled with hide and seek.

 

But now that creek 

is dirty with toxic junk

and where bush once stood

a bridge takes place. 

 

A sorry waste. 

 

A contest entry

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    August 17, 2008
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    you did a wonderful job with this


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    awww this is so sad, but true, nicely written and good luck in the contest *hugs*
    Stephanie ♥


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    Oh yes I do like it, but it's such a sad statement about society today and how easily we ruin landscapes.
    I loved the way your onw thoughts flowed in this
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    Can't have that now

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