My heart was drained of love
something that you couldn't give.
I don't want to be here anymore
because you were my reason to live.
How can you make me cry
when I'm at home waiting for you?
When did you stop caring
and what made you stop loving me too?
How can you be so mean to me
after we've been together for two years?
I've given you everthing I had
and all you've given me is tears.
I sleep alone and have bad dreams
and I awake feeling scared.
And you're not there for me at all
because you never really cared.
I feel so tired and emotionally drained
and I wish I could stop crying.
Because I want to be over you and move on
so that one day I can start smiling.
A contest entry
- What drains you? by peter1.
450 points, ended August 19, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Brilliant!!
This is truly one of the best writes in the list! I can actually feel like I can experience your grief and I LOVE your passion!!! This is an EXCELLENT entry to this contest!!!
Dr. P
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Dude, I feel your pain...I only hope that this is fictional and not something that you are having to deal with at the moment because I have been there, and I KNOW how much HELL it is, and how much PAIN there is...no matter what, this is an excellent write!!! xoxoxoxo
Kittyom
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This is so sad and I can see why this much emotional pain could make you feel so drained. It is not a good feeling to deal with. I wish you the best,and hope things get better for you. Nice job expressing some painful emotions. Blessings, Patty
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